I read this entry with some friends and, boy, was it an experience.
I need to preface this by saying I'm definitely not the target audience for this work, considering this appears to be a very horny heterosexual piece with some specific... fixations on certain body parts and proportions. But I was more than ready to give it a fair shake.
Unfortunately the VN, as it currently is, is in such a rough state that I find it difficult to appreciate it for what it was probably trying to do. The prose is riddled with mistakes and ESL-isms which sometimes make the text genuinely difficult to understand. The sprites are often positioned irrespective of backgrounds and their sizes tend to be all over the place and the music feels a bit repetitive.
I quite liked the backgrounds you used, but like everything else they lack a unifying artistic vision. The art styles are all over the place.
Even beyond these issues, there wasn't much in the story for me to latch on to, if you take away the horny stuff. It is structurally quite weak, it's a lot of going back and forth from the village to the forest and vice versa and having weird random encounters. Does the protagonist even end up using the "Love Perfume" he acquires?
What I will say is that the VN is so unabashedly shameless and out-there that my reading group and I were having a lot of fun with it despite its flaws, eager to find out what crazy thing was going to happen next.