I liked the art and the minigame. The story is also short and sweet.
However, when I reached day 06/04 Saturday, the game got stuck in this screen. If my memory doesn't fail me, I selected Iofi, Risu, Moona, Iofi, Risu before this happened.
I restarted the game and this time I focused on just one talent, getting a regular ending.
Improvement suggestions:
- I had to read the game description to figure out I had to use WASD to move during the minigame. Would be nice to have those instructions in the game screen, maybe on a corner.
- Save the player progress. Since the game got stuck for me I didn't feel like doing everything again to see how the story ends. If there was a save that would load the start of the day before my game got stuck, I could've continued more easily from there.
- Skip button doesn't work. If you want to try all routes, you have to go through repeated dialogue that would be faster to just skip.
- Bug? If you talk to the same talent a 4th time, she repeats the 3rd dialogue. Maybe consider not showing her again on the map if the maximum number of interactions has been reached?
- Bug? As mentioned at the start of my comment, after I reached day 6 without clearing the 3rd minigame with any of the talents, the game gets stuck. Probably a missing ending when the player doesn't reach the required conditions to get a heroine ending?
Good game! :)