Very very well done! I agree with most of the other reviews.
The intro dialogue is super nice and the controls talk - right down my alley. However it went on a little bit too long eventually making me stop and listen while I was already at Dockton - that could be handled a bit better especially using the intro river to maybe show some thing the guy on the radio is telling me (lights going off one-by-one for example). Also the message that you can rotate the camera comes very late which makes the first scrap collecting a bit awkward since you are completely blocked by trees there ^^
The dialogue is well written and fits the game.
Really like the 3D presentation of the world - sad that it does not run in web, did you try to make a webversion? It also seems like the game has an unlimited framerate and my GPU is going crazy haha would be very nice to have a limit or vsync option :)
Overall very solid dredge-like :P The presentation and narrative are superb, the level design is calm and easy to follow, cover art and screenshots create appeal and make you want to play - you know what you are doing (but the webbuiiild) and this has potential :) keep it up and thank you!