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Props to all the artists fr cuz I was drooling when writing the story /j

Well in the final cycles (which is where the story is), you don’t really see Tor’s light as much (other than they fell in love again). But yeah, in the first cycles they didn’t lose their memories and enjoyed their quality time :vv (it’s not extra information it’s in the script trust).

In truth, I really should build up to the final ending better, hence the whole Death encounter feeling pretty anticlimactic. I don’t think there’s another result that could’ve came out of that ending, but I definitely could’ve made it more painful :))

And I’m glad you enjoyed the story, I had the error screen idea but since I’m a first timer I was really hesitant to run it cuz idk how renpy reads the code…Could you imaging just running the game and instantly you got hit with the error screen 😰😰. Anyways props to the playtesters (my bros) for testing everything just in case :vv

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absolutely! I want to be clear, I certainly don't have a problem  with the story beats, just the execution. You really did still knock it out of the park. I think it may sound a little pretentious to say, but part of the reason I wrote so much is because I believe you have the power! It was a great read, well worth the time invested.