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I thought i was playing a hentai game, i was wrong. The first half is pretty good, but the second half devolved into mostly dialog, and a major absence of sec scenes of any sort. You aren't getting a threshing with Emma and Rin before the update, sex with melon just stops during her missions, three requests never end with a finishing scene, just a preview clip and it cuts right back to the option buttons, i.e. requesting a bj from the flower woman ends up her saying chum in my mouth don't get fun on my precious soil, then no cumshot and cut to black.

I hope I save someone else the time I wasted, it's not worth the effort, especially if you're looking for a game like Corrupted Kingdom or Lustful Sin, there just aren't enough action scenes to currently justify playing this "hentai game".

TerrArch122 days ago(+10)(-4)

That sounds like a bonus to anyone who isnt a coward.

But seriously the writing is one of the biggest impacts on the quality of an H-scene. Properly pacing them is essential to having them be actually impactfull. Monroe is a prime example, where upon actually getting an insertion sex scene it is much more hot due to the wait and effort that goes into it. The whole vibe of a dam breaking and letting lose a flood would simply not have worked if she immediately jumped to the mating press scene two. The time that it take to unlock and the naritive weight that carries impacts how hot the resulting scene is.

PS if you want more straight to the point, a fuck no talk porn games id highly recommend checking out more easern games from places like DLsite or otherwise and rear away from the visual novel type games.

hoboguru122 days ago(+5)(-9)

You know there's several other games on itch that don't overstuffed the game with dialog, with fully fleshed out storylines, full amazing sex scenes, repeateable scenes for those times you're waiting for the next next update, etc.

Dimension 69 just fails to hit the mark. There's only a handful of sex scenes, penetrative or otherwise, request scenes aren't fleshed out, so it's pointless to replay them or even play them in the first place after you see two of them. There's no reason to keep the game while waiting the long time to get the next update, because the creator is no longer fleshing out the updates. The beginning of the game has great build up, then it just simmers away.

As the person playing aren't you supposed to be fucking people to "increase" your abilities? You'd think so considering how it's literally said in the dialog, but it all just panders out. What was the point of adding Emma and Rin now, when none of their side scenes are finished, and they barely have a couple scenes between them. It's literally six hours of dialog and light teasing.

But go ahead and be angry all you want that I don't like your favorite game and warned others about it's lackluster approach.

TerrArch121 days ago(+2)(-1)

Fist, i aint mad. I hold no resentment towards you and i dont see why i should or ever would. When i made that part near the end of my comment that wasn't meant to convey a fealing of "eeerm oh well why dont you get off the REAL games and go play something else if you dont like it 🤓🤓🤓." I want to be the last person who makes these types of unhelpfull comments. Rather i was attempting to state some things ive noticed through my years of playing these types of games, that the more VN like and western the games are the more verbose they get. This was meant to serve as a recommendation to where to look for games that might fit you more, and to end the comment of "freindly" as to not insite agression. In retrospect i did a bad job at conveying this and even through the recommendation assumed that you knew less than me, for this i apologize. I wasn't trying to downplay anything about games from any one place or another (hell, one of my favorite ones comes from this website, granted, its probably the source of most of my biases).

While i do agree that it isnt the best of games, Id hardly call it a "waste of time", especially compared to some other lackluster games ive played. While the scenes are pretty far spaced out later on they do have a decent enough ammount of quality to them. And while they aren't the best you can find id hardly say that that makes them worthless. Especially when considering how much of the game, and more importantly, characters are unfinished. Many of the characters sex scenes are are only really mid due to the fact that the game just isnt nearly finished yet. The characters who have been properly fleshed out with content have some pretty good sex scenes like Monroe or kit. Because of this its safe to assume that other characters like Azalea Vapor and Emma will get ones of a simaler quality when they finally get properly fleshed out more. You wouldn't call an artists scetch or a writers first draft a shitty product because you dont criticize an unfinished work through the same lens as a finished one. And again, while there are games that do better in any aspect you could point towards, even when comparing them at simaler points in developing that doesnt make it worthless. The whole thing about criticizing an unfinished product is why in the original response i brought up someone like Monroe and not one of my favorite characters like Azalea. One of these characters is mostly finished, or at the very least fleshed out, one of these i can fairly critique because that ones content is there. This isnt to say that you shouldn't criticize an unfinished product, you should, but you shouldn't treat it like its a finished one; you have to approach it with a different set of standards and a different goal in mind. Many characters dont havegood sex scenes that are intimate beyond a blowjob. This is true, and it is frustrating especially. But more than either of those it is understandable considering the characters in question aren't near done at all.

I agree that the beginning has less sex scenes compared to after, but i wouldn't say that it sizzels out completely. Because while the second part does have significantly less sex scenes, it naritively did pick up the pace quite a bit, with Azalea being a decent example with some pretty good intregue as to how her dimension got to the way it is. The sex scenes are less prevelent, but so long as the dev doesn't make the payoff to it all like just a handjob or something it plays into the argument i made in my previous comment; that being that more time bonding and leaning about a character = more quality in resulting sex scenes.

While i do partially agree that the whole idea that "spreading oneself across the web to increase their power and 'stay' upon the world" is severely underutilized for how interesting a concept it is, there isnt really an easy way i could see them being able to do so, at least in the current content. Becuase outside of the obligatory "fishing minigame in a itch.io VN 3D style ero-game"™️©️®️, there isnt much obvious game stuff that could actually show off that power. So gameplay wise there isn't any way to show that off, and story wise there isn't really an opportunity to display that power either. Itd would be nice to see that power growth, but where would it even make sense to show it? Most situations currently just aren't applicable to showing that stuff off. Witch again is a shame considering how interesting the topic is and how much you could potentially do with the idea. (like, what does it mean to "create"? Would a prolific philosipher or inventor count by introducing the things he's made to other worlds, would that count for "creation" across the universal womb? Would there have been cases of people starting multidimensional families and creating sudo empires? Shit makes my writerbrain brain go crazy. Anyway, i digress,) Despite this there is small amounts of it here and there starting to show with Azaleas most recent event (iirc the MC teleported Melon and the cat away before a bullet could hit them) so there are signs that it could start showing up more regularly as the plot goes farther and farther.

I am not going to argue the part about the request "scenes" however. They are agreeably kind of garbage. Like i get not having a CG for them but even so bruh make that shit longer than two lines or just remove it lmao. I actually thought that they were bugged when i first saw them. Like man saying that they arent very fleshed out is giving them too much credit lol.

oh yah btw when writing i tend to get distracted halfway through, meaning i tend to make the coment in more isolated parts. so though i did a runthrough of the comment later i apologize if it feels a bit segmented and disjointed.

hoboguru121 days ago(+1)(-7)

I don't know why you thought I would read all that. But good for you!

Dussop121 days ago(+6)

Nice of you to give up on the argument as soon as you are confronted with the possibility of being wrong. Many of your critiques are provably wrong so I imagine you convinced yourself into your position just because you didn't like the game, which is fine, you can just dislike the game. Almost every fan of the game that has spoken to me about the pacing of the game has said the exact opposite of you, where the first half of the game is weak and then it becomes strong later. I don't think you understand that without context and build up, there's no substance to the sex scenes.

Also, if you think THIS game has pointless dialogue you must be new here, this game is considerably on the shorter side in this space. The only 'feedback' I'll take to heart from your rage baiting is that requests are a bit useless, which I understand. They were added a long time ago to fill some of the gaps between h-scenes as something neat to look at as you level up character's relationship levels, functionally it has been replaced by the dedicated repeatable sex scenes, so maybe it's time for me to rethink it's use, though I feel like REMOVING more H-content would blow a blood vessel in your brain.

I hope you return to the game in the future again, and thank you to the person who left a proper response to the game, I read the whole thing and I'll take your comments to heart and see what I can do to improve upon it.

hoboguru120 days ago(-9)

No. It's a pointless game to waste your time on. I'm not changing my mind. I'm just not reading 7 paragraphs of someone else's opinion, because I don't fucking care what you or he think.

So be mad all you want, Dimension 69 is a disappointing game, which does not live up to its name, and has obviously not had the full love and attention it deserves put in to it.

Some other games are worse, some are better. Dimension 69 doesn't suck any less because of how other games work, although it does highlight what would make the game better or worse.

If you're that mad, then flesh out the request function, maybe add the important scene of "the threesome" before stopping the Emma/ Rin missinons for the version. You dont have to realease an update unless its finished. But the best idea, is to stop slacking on your work instead of bitching at me for having an opinion about it.

RuskiPotato120 days ago(+6)(-1)

what about the droid attack on the wookies

hoboguru120 days ago(+1)(-3)

UuUuhHaAaGgHhHdRrDdRdRdD

I think that's wookie for "they will never be forgiven!" But I'm a bit rusty on my grunts and growls

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TerrArch119 days ago (1 edit) (-1)

Grabs comically oversized Odachi

Dramatically puffs cigarette

O.K.— I'll shorten.

T.S. i'm C. I don't H.P.G., why should i H.O. to such pointless H.S. I wont try to RPG for TSOA. Its to far B.M. I dont make DWC. Don't get all pissy because i SMOT; The W.G. speak like UGSTs, W.S. TOTE cut right into T.S.M. of It. The finalle was S.T. to end the conversation on "F.T." Though clearly that D.W.

While this peice isn't an IWOA, you'd need a HBH to appraise it as "WNAA". Its clear especially compared to other lackluster disappointments ive stumbled across the this holds S.M. While the preformances are STLW later on, they have AQ for their spacing. Beliving that the preformance not being the greatest makes it a W.O.T. shows a DIYOAE. Your LOAC shows even more when you understand that A.S.S. All masterpeices take E.T., and many in this play are barely in their OAs Its UAFSS to judge the infant to the elderly. You dont call a R.S. a poor W.O.A. because its not an "Art" yet, its unfinished. There are many MIAW, its foolish to think they S.T.W. If they were deemed WNAA then they could never GIMP. WDYTT i brought up the old horned hag and not the overdue compost? One, is GFOS, the other is YMV. One can be fairly critisised because it's FMD that T.O. Not to shackle WYCAC Criticize, kep proding the UEAI, however you must SWASS if you wish for fairness. Many actors LDAI performances beyond SCT. It can SAAWO, but you must wait because it HHTT Germinate. YCE such a young corpse to bloom with beauty yet.

While your observation that the preformances are more common E, you are M.I.S. that it loses steam as they grow M.D. Characters like the Overgrown Compost are getting a more vivid screen of their disasters painted. The landscape around each scene grow more lush as they becomes more rare, adding to the P. Without B.B.I. all art is just C.I.S. The veiwer NTCAC acting in it or the performance is weightless. The pause between them is essential to germinate that. As long as the painter doesn't STO with meaningless B.S. it will payoff.

If you are incapable of making your own thoughts and interpreting artistic expression then comment it and ill give the ""Awnser key"" to you

RuskiPotato119 days ago(+1)(-1)

Too much SANGRIA makes for an unartful prose.

TerrArch119 days ago (7 edits) (-1)

Yah i did half of it yesterday and the other half today. Looking back i could've did some of it better. I feel that too much though was put into how the acronyms sounded translated and not the art itself. Plus i was overall a bit inconsistent. Like in some cases i would use different ammount of characters for word under similar circumstances, like using "AW" for "Artwork" and just a "P" for Payoff when these two examples should've followed the same rules. My artwork still has much to improve on.

The excesive ammount of SANGARIA was pourposefully overdone however (though admittedly the first paragraph was a bit overdone. Three acronyms back to back is just devious). I personally despise bitches who cop out with "i aint reading allat", and malicious compliance is far and above the most beautiful artform. I actually had to hold myself back from removing a good bit of it later on because thatd ruin the pourpose of the coment and the joke therein

Also like im just to YiSang pilled to roast people like ryoshu it feels like a sin to very my soul when i call someone "dim-witted". Its just– my body repulses at the thought. It feels like im leaving my ideology to rot in the dirt when im actively being malicious online. Either way my shit talking could use work as well.

Ill take constructive critisim if you got any also. Im planning to make this a regular response to "i aint reading that much" style comments. If you need the "awnser key" to brutally rip into it thats excusable as well, though i am intrested in your interpretations.

RuskiPotato119 days ago(+1)(-1)

the worst part about this is that i am slowly understanding what the fuck you're saying and i've translated some of these

RuskiPotato119 days ago (7 edits) (+1)(-1)

That Said, i'm Confident. I don't Have Patience to Guess/Hear Pointless Gripe [??] Why should I hear out such pointless Horse Shit. I wont try to RPG[???] for TSOA[????] it's too far below me. I don't make dumb wild connections. Don't get all pissy because I Said My Own Take(?) The WG[??] speak like UGTS[??] WS[??] TSM [???] The finale was Straight Trash(?) to end the conversation on Foolish Talk[(?)] Though that clearly Didn't Work. While this piece isn't an Instant Work Of Art, you need a Half-Brained Head to appraise it as 'Was Not Art At All'. It's clear compared to many disappointments ive stumbled across this holds Some Merit. Believing the performances not being the greatest makes it a Waste of Time shows a 'Delusional Idiot Yelling Obscenity At Everything'. Your Lack of Artistic Comprehension shows even more when you understand that Art Should Simmer. All masterpieces take Enough Time and many in this play are barely in their Opening Acts. Its Unfair And Foolishly Simple S[??[ to judge the infant to the elderly. You don't call a Rough Sketch a poor Work Of Art. because its not an "Art" yet, its unfinished. There are many Masterpieces In At Work, it's foolish to think they S.T.W [Stumble To Worthlessness(?)] If they were deemed 'Was Not Art At All' then they could never Grow Into Masterful Pieces. Why Do You Think That I brought up the old horned hag and not the overdue compost? One, is Good For One Scene, the other is Your Mediocre Viewpoint[??]. One can be fairly criticized because it's Functionally Moronic that T.O.[????] Not to shackle What You Can And Cannot Criticize, keep prodding the Underdeveloped Effort At Innovation[??], however you must Step With A Sensible Standard[?] if you wish for fairness. Many actors LackDAI[???] performances beyond SCT[????]. It can Stand As Work Of Art, but you must wait because it Hasn't Had Time To Germinate. You Cant Expect such a young corpse to bloom with beauty yet. LCCB Assistant Manager Ryōshū Full.png

RuskiPotato119 days ago

do not spoil me i must translate the rest

RuskiPotato119 days ago(+1)

I am semi inclined to believe that YMV stands for 'Your Movie Sucks' for the sole reason of the youtuber

hoboguru118 days ago(-2)

You're game doesn't need an answer key. Still not trying to decide your overlengthly message. And I did express my thoughts, you're just butthurt because your game is getting criticisms and your throwing a temper tantrum instead of buckling down and making your project a perfect creation.

It's okay if you don't have any drive and a weak heart, a lot of people go for the bare minimum. But then all you'll ever have is a disappointing game with a catch title.

TerrArch118 days ago

N.B.