Too much SANGRIA makes for an unartful prose.
Yah i did half of it yesterday and the other half today. Looking back i could've did some of it better. I feel that too much though was put into how the acronyms sounded translated and not the art itself. Plus i was overall a bit inconsistent. Like in some cases i would use different ammount of characters for word under similar circumstances, like using "AW" for "Artwork" and just a "P" for Payoff when these two examples should've followed the same rules. My artwork still has much to improve on.
The excesive ammount of SANGARIA was pourposefully overdone however (though admittedly the first paragraph was a bit overdone. Three acronyms back to back is just devious). I personally despise bitches who cop out with "i aint reading allat", and malicious compliance is far and above the most beautiful artform. I actually had to hold myself back from removing a good bit of it later on because thatd ruin the pourpose of the coment and the joke therein
Also like im just to YiSang pilled to roast people like ryoshu it feels like a sin to very my soul when i call someone "dim-witted". Its just– my body repulses at the thought. It feels like im leaving my ideology to rot in the dirt when im actively being malicious online. Either way my shit talking could use work as well.
Ill take constructive critisim if you got any also. Im planning to make this a regular response to "i aint reading that much" style comments. If you need the "awnser key" to brutally rip into it thats excusable as well, though i am intrested in your interpretations.