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Yah i did half of it yesterday and the other half today. Looking back i could've did some of it better. I feel that too much though was put into how the acronyms sounded translated and not the art itself. Plus i was overall a bit inconsistent. Like in some cases i would use different ammount of characters for word under similar circumstances, like using "AW" for "Artwork" and just a "P" for Payoff when these two examples should've followed the same rules. My artwork still has much to improve on. 

The excesive ammount of SANGARIA was pourposefully overdone however (though admittedly the first paragraph was a bit overdone. Three acronyms back to back is just devious). I personally despise bitches who cop out with "i aint reading allat", and malicious compliance is far and above the most beautiful artform.  I actually had to hold myself back from removing a good bit of it later on because thatd ruin the pourpose of the coment and the joke therein

Also like im just to YiSang pilled to roast people like ryoshu it feels like a sin to very my soul when i call someone "dim-witted". Its just– my body repulses at the thought. It feels like im leaving my ideology to rot in the dirt when im actively being malicious online. Either way my shit talking could use work as well. 

Ill take constructive critisim if you got any also. Im planning to make this a regular response to "i aint reading that much" style comments. If you need the "awnser key" to brutally rip into it thats excusable as well, though i am intrested in your interpretations.

Grabs comically oversized Odachi

Dramatically puffs cigarette

O.K.—  I'll shorten.

T.S. i'm C. I don't H.P.G., why should i H.O. to such pointless H.S. I wont try to RPG for TSOA. Its to far B.M. I dont make DWC. Don't get all pissy because i SMOT; The W.G. speak like UGSTs, W.S. TOTE cut right into T.S.M. of It.  The finalle was S.T. to end the conversation on "F.T." Though clearly that D.W. 

While this peice isn't an IWOA, you'd need a HBH to appraise it as "WNAA". Its clear especially compared to other lackluster disappointments ive stumbled across the this holds S.M. While the preformances are STLW later on, they have AQ for their spacing. Beliving that the preformance not being the greatest makes it a W.O.T. shows a DIYOAE. Your LOAC shows even more when you understand that A.S.S. All masterpeices take E.T., and many in this play are barely in their OAs Its UAFSS to judge the infant to the elderly. You dont call a R.S. a poor W.O.A. because its not an "Art" yet, its unfinished. There are many MIAW, its foolish to think they S.T.W. If they were deemed WNAA then they could never GIMP. WDYTT i brought up the old horned hag and not the overdue compost? One, is GFOS, the other is YMV. One can be fairly critisised because it's FMD that T.O. Not to shackle WYCAC Criticize, kep proding the UEAI, however you must SWASS if you wish for fairness. Many actors LDAI performances beyond SCT. It can SAAWO, but you must wait because it HHTT Germinate. YCE such a young corpse to bloom with beauty yet.

While your observation that the preformances are more common E, you are M.I.S. that it loses steam as they grow M.D. Characters like the Overgrown Compost are getting a more vivid screen of their disasters painted. The landscape around each scene grow more lush as they becomes more rare, adding to the P. Without B.B.I. all art is just C.I.S. The veiwer NTCAC acting in it or the performance is weightless. The pause between them is essential to germinate that. As long as the painter doesn't STO with meaningless B.S. it will payoff.

If you are incapable of making your own thoughts and interpreting artistic expression then comment it and ill give the ""Awnser key"" to you

Fist, i aint mad. I hold no resentment towards you and i dont see why i should or ever would. When i made that part near the end of my comment that wasn't meant to convey a fealing of "eeerm oh well why dont you get off the REAL games and go play something else if you dont like it 🤓🤓🤓."  I want to be the last person who makes these types of unhelpfull comments.  Rather i was attempting to state some things ive noticed through my years of playing these types of games, that the more VN like and western the games are the more verbose they get. This was meant to serve as a recommendation to where to look for games that might fit you more, and to end the comment of "freindly" as to not insite agression. In retrospect i did a bad job at conveying this and even through the recommendation assumed that you knew less than me, for this i apologize. I wasn't trying to downplay anything about games from any one place or another (hell, one of my favorite ones comes from this website, granted, its probably the source of most of my biases). 

While i do agree that it isnt the best of games, Id hardly call it a "waste of time",  especially compared to some other lackluster games ive played. While the scenes are pretty far spaced out later on they do have a decent enough ammount of quality to them. And while they aren't the best you can find id hardly say that that makes them worthless. Especially when considering how much of the game, and more importantly, characters are unfinished. Many of the characters sex scenes are are only really mid due to the fact that the game just isnt nearly finished yet. The characters who have been properly fleshed out with content have some pretty good sex scenes like Monroe or kit. Because of this its safe to assume that other characters like Azalea Vapor and Emma will get ones of a simaler quality when they finally get properly fleshed out more.  You wouldn't call an artists scetch or a writers first draft a shitty product because you dont criticize an unfinished work through the same lens as a finished one. And again, while there are games that do better in any aspect you could point towards, even when comparing them at  simaler points in developing that doesnt make it worthless. The whole thing about criticizing an unfinished product is why in the original response i brought up someone like Monroe and not one of my favorite characters like Azalea. One of these characters is mostly finished, or at the very least fleshed out, one of these i can fairly critique because that ones content is there. This isnt to say that you shouldn't criticize an unfinished product, you should, but you shouldn't treat it like its a finished one; you have to approach it with a different set of standards and a different goal in mind. Many characters dont havegood sex scenes that are intimate beyond a blowjob. This is true, and it is frustrating especially. But more than either of those it is understandable considering the characters in question aren't near done at all.

I agree that the beginning has less sex scenes compared to after, but i wouldn't say that it sizzels out completely. Because while the second part does have significantly less sex scenes, it naritively did pick up the pace quite a bit, with Azalea being a decent example with some pretty good intregue as to how her dimension got to the way it is. The sex scenes are less prevelent, but so long as the dev doesn't make the payoff to it all like just a handjob or something it plays into the argument i made in my previous comment; that being that more time bonding and leaning about a character = more quality in resulting sex scenes.

While i do partially agree that the whole idea that "spreading oneself across the web to increase their power and 'stay' upon the world" is severely underutilized for how interesting a concept it is, there isnt really an easy way i could see them being able to do so, at least in the current content. Becuase outside of the obligatory "fishing minigame in a itch.io VN 3D style ero-game"™️©️®️, there isnt much obvious game stuff that could actually show off that power. So gameplay wise there isn't any way to show that off, and story wise there isn't really an opportunity to display that power either. Itd would be nice to see that power growth, but where would it even make sense to show it? Most situations currently just aren't applicable to showing that stuff off. Witch again is a shame considering how interesting the topic is and how much you could potentially do with the idea. (like, what does it mean to "create"? Would a prolific philosipher or inventor count by introducing the things he's made to other worlds, would that count for "creation" across the universal womb? Would there have been cases of people starting multidimensional families and creating sudo empires? Shit makes my writerbrain brain go crazy. Anyway, i digress,) Despite this there is small amounts of it here and there starting to show with Azaleas most recent event (iirc the MC teleported Melon and the cat away before a bullet could hit them) so there are signs that it could start showing up more regularly as the plot goes farther and farther. 

I am not going to argue the part about the request "scenes" however. They are agreeably kind of garbage. Like i get not having a CG for them but even so bruh make that shit longer than two lines or just remove it lmao. I actually thought that they were bugged when i first saw them. Like man saying that they arent very fleshed out is giving them too much credit lol. 

oh yah btw when writing i tend to get distracted halfway through, meaning i tend to make the coment in more isolated parts. so though i did a runthrough of the comment later i apologize if it feels a bit segmented and disjointed.

Plant.

This game is approved.

she gets better dont worrly lol. 

But also there is just like a skip button. I get and agree that its annoying that you gotta stop the story with the character you like to progress another you can always revisit events in the momories tab and the skipping only takes like a minute at most

That sounds like a bonus to anyone who isnt a coward.

But seriously the writing is one of the biggest impacts on the quality of an H-scene. Properly pacing them is essential to having them be actually impactfull. Monroe is a prime example, where upon actually getting an insertion sex scene it is much more hot due to the wait and effort that goes into it. The whole vibe of a dam breaking and letting lose a flood would simply not have worked if she immediately jumped to the mating press scene two. The time that it take to unlock and the naritive weight that carries impacts how hot the resulting scene is.

PS if you want more straight to the point, a fuck no talk porn games id highly recommend checking out more easern games from places like DLsite or otherwise and rear away from the visual novel type games.

There are plenty of things you should expect from a porn game. A fucking war arc is not one of them. Bravo, 200/10

step one: find "summon rock"

step two: find "homing" 

step three: win

Mans self aware and i love it, I was waiting for a H scene and being able to call the angel fucking hisenburg caught me off guard so much lmfao