this is such a cool idea for the mechanics !
the instructional + narration text is a bit hard to read, and i feel like a tutorial area to introduce each ability one by one would maybe feel a bit better than having to read a bunch of text upfront and remember later
save points are frequent enough so i don't feel punished for experimenting around tho, so that's good
but for the time constraints, it's nice and has a lot of potential, good job !