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Thanks, but… Well, I guess I feel like I didn’t explained myself properly enough ^^’

So… Here’s the real, elaborated thing : I started this VN along with a friend, but his english level is a fairly bit under mine, so he sometime had some inconveniences to follow the reading with the lack of « , » and others things (as he kinda told me at least), which made him slowing down a bit ever further. Also, another might also take a look, but she have others stuff to take care of for now.

So, at some point, I suggested I would do some « polishing » while I’m reading it myself (as well as taking the opportunity to look at thoses plots contradictions on the fly, like in the Oz-Dave-MFD example mentionned above, but there’s some mor) so the three of us can enjoy the Beta version of the VN at a better level, since we don’t know how many years are left before your rewrite would be done.

I want to clarify : We’re not the streaming or playthrough type, and this polished version is and will remain strickly kept sure in a USB drive, so it would never leak no matter what, even if computer hacked. Also, I’m specifically talking about reading flow improvements and fixing the few occasionnal moment where the plot really contradict itself or doesn't add up with the previous choices and dialogs, and Nothing Else. No messing with any aspect of the story, N-o-n-e.

Sooooo… I guess the real meaning of my previous comment is : Since I’m already doing it for them (and myself)… Would you want me to hand it over to you, so you could decide after check if it's worth sharing to other readers over here, or do I just keep it for us ?

Again, I wish you wouldn’t be mad at the idea now you may have a better understanding of it, ‘cause I feared you’d think I’m messing with your story, but I’m Not! I really just have fixing and polishing in mind, and mostly for my friends' benefit too. I really would feel bad to give the wrong idea, especially with how much I like this VN *.*