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I love this entry! So much information and such a detailed adventure for such a short pamphlet. Very concise for newer wardens. Excellent layout and design. The only feedback I really have is the panel with the bugs in the background was a little distracting. Other than that really love the concept and the execution. Great Job!

And have you ever read Earth X, the marvel graphic novel? There is a concept in it that is similar to the concept of the conscious statues in your adventure, and it is a pretty horrific concept. 

I have not, but it sounds interesting. I didn't have much hope that "statues with people inside them" would be a wholly original idea, but I am happy that it was at least the only occurrence of that concept in the Jam. 

Thanks for the feedback on the bugs. There was one other comment that I went overboard with the palette and variation between panels, so I've been looking for things to cut, but you're the first to have given me a specific suggestion on that front. 

Basically the deal there is I was concerned about not having left myself enough room for any illustrations, and although I am an artist, I'm not a sci-fi/fantasy artist, nor a portraitist. So I was looking for ways to integrating simple illustrations into the design. If they're distracting as a watermark, what I'll probably try to do is condense that panel slightly to leave some space at the bottom or in between sections and have a line of them crawling across.