A strong start to something!
I enjoyed that you put fishing mechanics in.
There's a bit of a long pause between picking up an item and being able to close the window explaining that you picked the item up.
The writing is obviously the strength of the game.
The narrative told in pictures gets the story across well, however the difference between those graphics and the rest of the game is a bit jarring. I'm not sure if they're intended to be 'child-like' to show Patch's point of view because they're too good for children's drawings, but since they don't match with the rest of the game's aesthetics it leads me to believe that's what was being depicted.