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hiya, looking thru ones i've already reviewed and noticed i must have forgotten to put my notes on this one! here's a super compressed version of those notes from memory--

paradise park had some of the best laughs for me throughout, dark as heck but uproarious. even a couple of days later i'm still thinking about the makeshift fort. i remember having questions about hinch and the "win" (survive?) state, but i forget what they were.

one of my faves i've read! lmk if you want more detailed notes, i know i saved them somewhere on my pc or phone. (i will be amalgamating them all once i am done reviewing)

Hey thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! And absolutely, any extra feedback you wrote down would be great

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found em! apologies in advance for them being pretty scattered/disorganized!

now THAT is how you write a page 1. i'm primed, i have an idea of what is gonna happen, but now i NEED to know how it plays out. one of the best intros i have seen so far

(reading what happens next) oh this is FILTHY work. hahahaha well done. 

i like the stat blocks for the worms, very good way to represent some nasty leechy guys

i know room is always at a premium on these things, but id love to know more about petrice! 

good lord. the makeshift fort. the sliding worm. these little details are SO GOOD. the mist, too?! you're relentless :D

cool to leave it open-ended, but what do you see as a win- (or, i guess more accurately, survive-) state for this adventure? clip hinch and take his ride? also how do you see including the love triangle into the nightmare?

awesome submission. you use the word "chaos" in here a few times and you are right to. delightfully depraved. absolute madness. great work!

Ahh thanks for the kind words! The only way off the orbital realistically is to swipe Hinch's ship or else survive until a theoretical rescue. My playtest players made it all the way to the service dock only to find their tanker had been stolen by panicked guests, and had to make their way back to the guest dock.