found em! apologies in advance for them being pretty scattered/disorganized!
now THAT is how you write a page 1. i'm primed, i have an idea of what is gonna happen, but now i NEED to know how it plays out. one of the best intros i have seen so far
(reading what happens next) oh this is FILTHY work. hahahaha well done.
i like the stat blocks for the worms, very good way to represent some nasty leechy guys
i know room is always at a premium on these things, but id love to know more about petrice!
good lord. the makeshift fort. the sliding worm. these little details are SO GOOD. the mist, too?! you're relentless :D
cool to leave it open-ended, but what do you see as a win- (or, i guess more accurately, survive-) state for this adventure? clip hinch and take his ride? also how do you see including the love triangle into the nightmare?
awesome submission. you use the word "chaos" in here a few times and you are right to. delightfully depraved. absolute madness. great work!