Overall - Great job! I loved the terrifying enemy slowly emerging from the shadows and chasing me across the countertop! The camera angles swooping around really heightened the dramatic tension, too!
Fun - Super fun scary experience! It was a really compelling game and I want more!
Theme - Nailed the theme - I felt quite small and vulnerable as the terrifying face came for me!
Aesthetics - I think some environmental lighting to highlight the details and the important bits would be awesome. Lighting (used sparingly) is so important to a horror game and I think this game would be even MORE scary with lights placed at dramatic moments!
Music- The music was great! Really heightened the terror as the clown head came for me! The tonal shift via the use of music was stellar. Really captured the emotions well.
Sound - Same as the music, well done.
Mechanics - Pretty simple mechanics - run, jump, climb. They seemed to be mostly working for me, so I have no complaints here. Would be cool to include some kind of puzzle element related to the evil clown - something to heighten the experience and the feeling of helplessness UNTIL you discover some way to either overpower or escape.
Story - Solid story. I loved when the paper emerged from the water and had writing all over it. Really captured the essence of the story. Great job!