Thank you for the in depth feedback and the positive words! I actually haven't played ABH yet so I didn't realize the similarity. You absolutely have my blessing to reskin the monster to a nautilus or something. And yea, I was feeling a bit of a time crunch so I know that the design is not great but I appreciate you specifically calling out the writing despite the bare bones layout.
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Okay, yeah, if you haven't read or played ABH it's just an unfortunate decision on your part, but the monsters in that are literally called "Carcinids," so when I saw your title I was hoping that it would either be building off that in some way or taking the crab angle in a different direction than "giant crab monster."