Hiya, here are some notes I took while reading this trifold! (presented in the order I thought em)
First thing is that cover art. My god it's beautiful. Made me immediately go "oh ok I need to know what the story is with this bad boy."
The landing sequence immediately presents a recognizable threat to the PCs, which I appreciate. (not to mention the names of the anomaly & areas!)
Saw astroid (vs asteroid) a few times -- intended? (i'm not dinging anyone for typos in my ratings, anyway. just pointing em out for future versions where I can)
I think I mentioned this on the discord, but the reality check table is so good that I could see myself recycling it in other sanity-testing adventures.
I'm not a Secret Agenda Guy so I would likely either be choosing one as the employer or having the party see them all on the job board and pick themselves. Again not a ding just a stray thought
Gorgon's Head encounter is SO COOL. the tells/cancels/results is such a great mechanic. For the combat stat, would it be rolling this on e.g. when it throws players against the ground? or is that automatic?
Taking my time getting to the inside because it is DENSE. There's so much stuff here!
I think this is a me problem, but I am having trouble wrapping my head around the dive mechanic -- let's say we decide to start by entering medusa. I roll 3 on the d5, for entering at 1, does that mean we start at petrified forest? or are we in at antechamber but the 4 is instead the event (aftermath of encounter which i guess i am rolling now)?
As confused as I sound, that's just easy enough to confirm here and figure out. The important part is that I am imagining some of these moments in these spaces with these encounters and they seem AWESOME.
Ok, realizing I am writing an entire essay here, gotta stop soon. You made something special here, just a cornucopia of brain-twisting moments with a clear goal at the end. I'd run this! Fantastic work!