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I read through you jam entry. Here's my written commentary on your adventure content and layout:

---Cool concept with a self aware planet trying to integrate the players

---Simple generator for making unique organisms

---It was a little unclear the PCs have crash landed. I had to read it twice to make sure.

---I feel like the ASA members are missing stats, or guidance on what stats should be

---I like the integration mechanic but it feels like the adventure would conclude before it gets full use

Thanks for the feedback! I intend to revise the module after the jam, so can tighten up the language around the crash. The lack of ASA stats was intentional as they are intended to be more passive and I didn't want to waste space, but I get the critique!