Hiya! Here are some notes I took while reading!
The backstory for this adventure feels really thoughtful and well-paced.
The homogen's description is horrifying. Very "thanks I hate it" (complimentary)
The character portraits are great. I'd love a little more "personality" direction for Junior, like with Claudius/Ophelia.
Appreciate the tone of melancholy through this.
Map looks fantastic. And easily legible. Really all of the art is A+.
Feels like there's a lot of unused space towards the margins of the pamphlet, I would have liked (at least for the digital) for everything to be a little more spread out -- it feels packed in (although haha I guess that fits the vibe). Or like line breaks before each new room description.
O2 rules are harsh. I imagine my players eating shit on O2. Not a complaint, just an observation.
Pound of Flesh broke my brain, now whenever I see the cast of a Shakespeare I feel like I need to brush up on the play in question :D
really enjoyed this read and could see myself running it at our table! Great work!