What a sweet tale! I love fanwork so much, especially when someone does the work to make an interactive one. It was really heartfelt!
Normally I wouldn't mention typos, but since you wxplicitly asked for them:
Should be "the more /you/ lean on proverbs."
should be "analogy" instead of "anology".
Should be "But /our/ chairperson" instead of out.
Missing screen title?
There's a few missed commas as well, but you might consider that too minor to note. Loved your work!
