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AMAZING GAME

Ok, so right off the bat, I notice the art, and it's good. The text box fits well with the theme of the story and the background art. The idea of making the cursor a vial of blood also fits, especially because of the minimalist design of the text box. The sprites look very nice. I liked how the CGs were at multiple angles. It gives a more dynamic feel to the game. Overall, the art was better than the art from a lot of commercial otome games.

The music was also pretty good! It fit well with what was happening, and it wasn't boring. Kudos to your composer.

The story is very cute! I almost started squealing multiple times (especially the part when she met the hunter, 'cause hot damn). I like the plot idea. It makes me wonder what will happen if she falls for one o the other guys...hm... But I like how the story was also a bit serious. (like, what happens when they find out that she's a vampire!?)

Just a bit of constructive criticism, but I noticed a few errors in the script. Some spaces were missing in between the period of the last sentence and the beginning of the first sentence, and some words weren't capitalized when they were supposed to, but other than that, this game is perfect. Just don't forget to proofread it before you release the full game, I guess.

Btw, speaking of releasing the full game, do you have a set date for that? Also, are you planning to make this a commercial game?

Hello mshen19!

Thank you so much for giving our demo a try and for your compliments! We are very glad to have your feedback as well since it helps to improve our game for the better!

Personally as the writer I'm happy that you like the plot! And your guess on it hmm~ I can't spoil it but you are on the right direction of thinking haha~ >w< Thank you for reminding us about proofreading as well; honestly details just keep escape my eyes when I wrote the script and transfered it to ren'py, and we unfortunately don't have a lot of credible proofreaders. This is definitely a point that we will improve on in the final version.

On your question, we are planning to release the final version during June, but it really depends on how fast I can write the script and how fast our artists can draw (coz real life stuffs haha OTL). We will, however try our best to abide to that deadline, and will try to have updates on the final version as often as possible. And yes, it will be a commercial title, although we are a little hesitant on the price right now (we have one in our head but not sure whether it's reasonable or not). If possible, could you share your opinion with us on what price you are willing to pay for the game? It would help us a lot!

Thank you very much for reading. I hope you will continue to support us in the future!

---- Narcisse19 -----

Hm, I guess it depends on how long the overall story is...?

There's this one otome game for IOS called "Ephemeral." I don't exactly remember how much each story costed, but it was very reasonable for such a good game. (I think all the main stories put together was about $15 or so...? And that's for 4 "romancable" characters.)

That being said, my absolute max would be $20, give or take. (Sorry, I would be able to pay more, but I'm kind of too young to have money of my own, so...ahaha...)

Hi mshen19!

Thank you for your input!

It is never an easy job to price your own work, for several reasons, but it's also a challenge we must overcome haha XD But what we can tell you right now is that it won't be over $10.

We hope you will continue to support us in the future!

I know I'm not exactly part of this, but, if it's going to be over 5-7 hours of gameplay, then I recommend around $6-8. (depends on you tho)

Hello Raze1718!

Thank you so much for your suggestion!

We haven't decided on a fixed price yet, so any opinion is greatly appreciated!

We hope you will continue to support us in the future!

I will!