A hundred steam-filled thanks for taking the time to read and post! It's wonderful to receive feedback.
I went back and forth on the wording for the Fanged Deserter bite attack bit. I did think about leaving it out, but also didn't wanted a Fanged Deserter player to feel left out rolling that result (getting such a boon is a big deal). Maybe something simple like "A Fanged Deserter's bite attack increases to dX".
On the graphical side, I can see that. But, hey, the first rule was that it couldn't be perfect, soI guess I nailed that!