Well written, and nice to finally have dragons enter The Dying World.
I love the tonality of the writing, and the Dragon Quests.
There are a few places where your writing could perhaps just be cleared up a little, like: "
Fanged Deserters increase Bite attack damage by one step." I know what you mean, but perhaps Fanged Deserters increase Bite Attack Damage to a higher die. Or maybe even leaving it out?
If I were to looks at the graphical side of things, I would consider you to try to simplify. Take the right hand side with the beautiful dragon by Tania, I think you could've fitted all the text around that dragon and left it in full opacity. :)
Congratulations with publishing a piece, there's a lot to be proud of, and I cannot wait to see your next one!