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Duuude! This zine is incredible. It's good to be exploring the Gnar again.

I hate, hate, hate the Vespids! Super creepy; well done. Now I want to run a mystery with this.

Super surreal. The layout took me a minute to grok, but once I did, I really liked the dungeon. Well done

Super creepy and fun! 

Great read! Ficklepiss and his sister are excellent villains! So much for PCs to interact with

This is excellent! I enjoyed everything about this; the false promise of the church, the couple that sold their kids, all of it! Great job

This is excellent! I enjoyed everything about this; the false promise of the church, the couple that sold their kids, all of it! Great job

I adore the shifting dungeon, and love how you executed that. The secret room entrance is nefarious! What a great problem for players to figure out.

I love it! Super creepy, while also fun and (potentially) a little goofy. I love these fishy folk

Thanks to both of the Gorblins for taking the time to read and comment! Who doesn't love dragons?!

A hundred steam-filled thanks for taking the time to read and post! It's wonderful to receive feedback.

I went back and forth on the wording for the Fanged Deserter bite attack bit. I did think about leaving it out, but also didn't wanted a Fanged Deserter player to feel left out rolling that result (getting such a boon is a big deal). Maybe something simple like "A Fanged Deserter's bite attack increases to dX".

On the graphical side, I can see that. But, hey, the first rule was that it couldn't be perfect, soI guess I nailed that! 

Thanks a million for taking the time to read it. Easy to add and tons to work with are the best compliments a creator can hope for! Hrm...that's two suggestions to BORG up the art. An update might have to be in the Sarkash Dragon's future.

I enjoyed this quite a bit. It offers a sliver of hope in a meager existence.

Yes, yes, yes! I love everything about this; the poem, the art, all of it! The only critique I offer is to put some prices for parts (the hook, teeth, perhaps meat).

Now that is a boss monster! The Inquisition cannot suffer such  blasphemous readings. The Spider's words are not the will of HE.

This is excellent! Very Borg-y; the way it blends the hopeless with humorous is ... Chef's kiss. I am loving the Anti-Family Recipe feature.

I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment; thank you! Any suggestions on the art? I can't remember my motivation, other than, "This is sweet art and I gotta get this done!" Hahaha

This is awesome, your descriptions are wonderfully evocative; well done! Keeping things short and sweet can be challenging at times. 

This was a fun read! Simple, creepy, and contained. 

I'm thrilled to hear it! Thanks for the review. I hope your player has tons of fun. Go Wild

I don't know it was possible to play ShadowDark with a hammer. I finally have something for that empty gear slot!

Thanks, got it updated!