I am loving this VN so far great work! This vn has really impressed me for how new it is, and has cemented it's spot as one of the vn's that I am impatiently awaiting new updates for:))
The only slight suggestion that I have is maybe make a glossary for terms. There are a few sci-fi terms and words that I didn't understand the definitions of, and when I went to google them, not much came up! I feel like that would help us readers understanding the world building a little bit better too!! (I feel like an example of this can be seen in NeveN)
Or maybe instead of a glossary or "journal" you could make the terms hoverable and include the definition that way as well. (An example of this can be seen in Cienie)
I apologize if I shouldn't mention other vns here, just let me know, and I'll edit my comment and remove the titles! I just thought I'd give examples of ways those features were implemented!!
edit: I got so impatient that I went to go support the patreon for new content! This is one of 3 FVNs where I just couldn't wait for the public release! Definitely give this game a shot:)
edit edit: Also ppl who are initially put off by Mizz and Caleia give them a chance!! Maybe I got really lucky with my choices but they really grew on me a ton! :))))