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Awesome, I posted some comments on that page.  Overall, pretty snazzy!  I really enjoyed reading through it and will probably try it out at some point when I get some spare time.  I added some suggestions and observations – hope it doesn't come off as critical, because that's not my intent; you never really know how much people want to talk about other ideas and suggestions versus how they're pretty happy with what they've got already, so feel free to ignore any of the suggestions for changes.  Thanks for sharing it and making it. I hope people enjoy it!

Your  suggestions were very clear and didn't feel too critical to me, so thanks.  I put up a new version (2 booklets) and added a devpost about modifying it based on your feedback.  I mentioned how helpful some of your comments were. Especially, about specific rules that you felt were bad (or too good). They helped me identify weak points in the design.