So after beating the game with the full love route harem, I've realized that there's about 50 metric fuck tons of dialogue in it and it'd take actual years to sift through it and fix some of the grammar mistakes.
That didn't change my opinion of the game at all though. It tells a very compelling story. While it isn't the best in terms of graphical quality (I played the compressed version so that's most of the reason why), I mainly found the story and characters appealing. I enjoyed the overall story as well as the antagonists in it. They were quite easy to hate even if they didn't appear all that often. The little combat sections were fun and simple too and only required a bit of thinking. I'm trying not to spoil things while at the same time trying to make a valid review that's actually meaningful and it's a bit difficult. Anyways, the choice of having an Albino woman as the main LI is very unique too and you've done an excellent job of making her a likeable character. The characters in general were incredibly varied. Each one have a very unique body and personality.
The only downside I've noticed is that it feels like some of the characters don't get that much screen time. There's a lot of them, 10 main ones and 3 side ones. And a few of them don't get much time to shine. So that's something I recommend trying to balance with future games. Trying to either limit the amount of romanceable characters or giving them all a decent chunk of screen time. I know this was basically a "trial run" and it feels like one. It feels like "Once in a Lifetime" which was also a sort of trial run. I'd say it was successful, you've successfully created a decent length very compelling and at times very wholesome story (at least on the routes I've chosen). That's another thing to mention, almost every character has three routes... three. Love, Sub, and sharing. The first two seem to be fairly interchangeable for almost every character as in you could have 5 on the love route and 5 on the sub route for example. The sharing one seems to be more of a separate game/completely different story, which I've not done as it's not my thing. That's impressive, especially considering the amount of changes each different combination of routes might bring to the story while making sure it still works together.
Pretty good game. I've enjoyed it and look forward to playing Inanna Revenge next.