Nice story and interesting dialogues! You got me hooked. It may not have been the wackiest in terms of humor, but it was refreshing to see an intriguing story unfold. I’ll be keeping an eye out for when you decide to complete it!
I tried to go for wacky but I just wasn't that good at it, haha. But an attempt at a romcom style of writing is probably practice I'll need, so it is what it is.
