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Hi,

thank you for the feedback! You are correct, it is basically my first work so rookie :D  I do agree the text needs editing, but self editing is a really hard thing as a beginner doing this for fun.

Thank you for the recommendations, and if you would like to send the book, please find the email above in the game description.

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Hey again, 

I sent you both, I hope you'll find them helpful! 

Otherwise you're on the right track. I mean, hey, you already started putting your work out there, most people would never! Just read, write and revise until you get a nosebleed as much as you can, and best of luck! ;x

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Thanks! I saw the email,  and will take a look when I have some time. 

Thank you for the encouragement as well. I do believe there is a famous quote of "the first draft just has to exist" or something like that.

I would consider all of this, even available to the public, a first draft :D