This game blew me away! Is this your first game ever!?
The typewriter effect is so good, especially at the beginning when all the letters jiggle around! It looks really good and professional. Very Undertale-y. And everything was interactive, everything had a little dialogue box which is just awesome. I loved all the little animations, how you moved between areas and the camera zoomed in and out, it's all really excellent! Great work!
Obviously it's short, but I really don't have any major critiques for this game, other than the game not closing with Escape and the window options we talked about on Discord (change default window title to game title, change default GameMaker icon to custom icon that's just like the player's head, etc., change the game options so I can click fullscreen on the window, resize the window, and start in fullscreen and let me toggle it on/off with F11).
It's very well done. Great work!