I was really enjoying the whole theater act, somehow even Bryan adds something to the act
Yeah, his jackass attitude and attemp to sabotage Carlos totally backfired. Best part ever xD
I had a lot of fun writing that sequence! I didn't originally have Bryan's interaction planned in my outline, but I went with it anyway because it just felt right in the moment X)
I concur, It really felt like something the character would do, and helped all three of the characters on the stage shine.