Howdydiddly KohailDreamer, pleasure to meet ya!
I just played a few minutes of the game and I will start off by saying that I like the concept that you have gone with and I find the art style you used with it to be quite nicely interesting too! I did notice a few spelling errors in what I read in the small snippet I played though so I would recommend proof reading it or asking a riend to do so with a script?
I did find the difficulty to be a tad heavy VERY quickly in the first chapter so far, but that may just be me :) Keep up the good work my good friend! You have done a remarkable job :D