Congrats on finishing your first GWJ ! The drawings for the story beginning and end are really pretty and the story is cool ! Overall the game has really good visuals. The platformer mechanics work well and finishing the four level was hard but not annoying thanks to the checkpoints. However I felt like the camera was moving too much, especially when I died quickly on my attempts, as the levels are really horizontals moving only the X-axis of the camera and not the Y could improve that I think. Anyway I didn't encounter any bugs and you did a good placement in the levels to have some diversity, it was fun to go through, great job !
Viewing post in Dream Catcher jam comments
Thank you for such detailed feedback! And yes, finishing my first GWJ was so rewarding - just getting a game out there to be played. I'm really happy to join a supportive game dev community! Thank you for the feedback on the camera movement, it will definitely be something I look into more with future games. Playing with the axis is something new for me to consider :D