it's eclectic and funky! i did get surprised by that one snare at 0:16 (on the upbeat before you do the noise crash) so you could have that very first one be a little gentler. nonetheless i must stress i really do like this percussion. like a lot. i love blade runner and i love this... especially the end, where you really get to show off the percussion together... you should totally make more songs using this set of sounds!! i think you could really cook something up with them

I like how you chose to convey the theme and I love the distortions you used. I can fully imagine the environment you were trying to create, and I could see this fitting very well into a cinematic!

For a bit of criticism, I like what you did with the metallic hit, the rhythm you used does especially well for building tension, but I personally find the stereo positioning of it a little disorienting on headphones. I think there's multiple approaches you could take (depending on if you'd rather emphasize balance or emphasize panning), but overall a good option could maybe be an EQ cut around 350-600 hz (and possibly 700-1200hz) to ease the louder areas while still keeping the intensity and the width. But also, I want to respect that you didn't have much time to make this track so there's bound to be things that don't get addressed, and I think overall you did well achieving what you wanted to create and I especially like how you conveyed intensity here!

Ok bro, you take up so much room/space with these spacey synths at the beginning rolling in slowly making one pay attention to the fq given but then you just slam into the ears at 0:17 with bunch of 100% volume no reverb intourface sounds. The idea is nice tho.

Very cool, visceral percussion in this one. I felt the "chopper" pad in the first half could've been decrescendoed soon after the arp was introduced (and shortly after it returns at 2:00) so it's not competing for the listener's attention with the more dynamic parts.