Great angle, I really enjoy this gruesome artist vampire character. The motto "Everything for the arts" comes to mind. I would have liked to know a bit more about the dead guy in the room. Great visceral writing, do look out with too mush flowery wording. It works really well for a vampire game, but not in every genre. It did flow very nice though, very thought provoking. 

Very good! The idea of a vampire expressing his feelings through painting is neat!

It was an interesting read, a lot of powerful imagery. I particularly liked the lake story. Nice job!