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@gaurd13007Hi, creator of the twine here!Well for not having anything to say about it, what feedback you gave is appreciated! I wasn't actually sure how to approach the formatting so I'm sorry to hear it didn't work in the end. This is actually (and probably obviously) one of my first serious-ish twine attempts so more than anything a lot of it was learning experience. I also left the story fairly vague cause of the word count restriction. I also really wanted to focus on seeing where I could go aestetically, since a lot of twine's use the default theme and I wanted to avoid doing that if possible. So I'm glad to hear you like the style :)Ofcourse none of this is to absolve your critique and next time I make one hopefully it will be an experience more enjoyable :) Thank you!
I'm not really sure what to say about it. I like the style, but it also isn't formatted well for smaller screens (1366x768 <- fairly common laptop resolution I am stuck with at the moment). As for the story, it's so vague I'm not really sure what to think.. I can understand if that's the point, but it just leaves me unsatisfied with the experience.