Cannon ball 1 - 0 Me

Well done! You need to work some more on your English but it's a good start and a good first game in that engine. Keep it up!

For your first time using rpg maker, this is pretty nice! It's a little rough around the edges, and the grammar and spelling could use some proofreading, but it's filled with nice ideas and has a pretty decent atmosphere going. Hope you decide to carry on using the engine, I'd definitely be interested to see what else you might make with it in the future!

I love these JRPG styled games and this was a fun entry. Spoiler: I got crushed by a cannon ball more times than I care to admit.

The music and audio design was well done, and the writing was great. I definitely got a specific mood from this, I only wish there was more! (Maybe I didn’t discover everythign =O) thank you for sharing!