Written very well! I included it in my compilation video of all of the Summer Pixel Jam games, if you'd like to check it out :)

I had fun with this! The writing was good and there were some good jokes. I liked the puppy ending in particular. I think this could benefit from two things however, first, it'd be nice if it was a little longer, and second, I think character portraits would add a lot of personality. That said, I had fun with this!!

4/5 couldn't give you anything for the subcategories though. I enjoyed it. The Reading Words to Making Decisions ratio is very high. I was able to explore multiple branches of the story without the usual stress from reading walls of text this medium throws at you.

Puns!