i'm slightly embarrassed to admit that this might be too vanilla for me to relate to.  going to a crowded bar is one of the most uncomfortable things i can imagine (though i appreciate that wallflowering was an option), i don't entirely know what a yandere is, and i was left wondering why he didn't turn into a hot demon before we had sex,

clearly well-written though, and putting in the effort for different body types is a really considerate touch

I like it the action-oriented writing! The chunks are well-sized for easy reading and there's plenty of choices to keep up engagement. Definitely something that can be played a few times to see how your decisions change the story. 10 thousand words is a lot, nice work!

Yay IF! I liked how much variety there was in the choices, made it fun to replay. I did notice some bugs--most notably that when I picked the neutral option for genitals (which I very much appreciated!), the text for the penis option still appeared.

I enjoyed how many dialogue choices there were to pick. Also nice that you could pick name, pronouns and genitals

Good work! An ending that really makes you say "oh, gosh." I like the presentation quite a bit, advancing the story by only a few lines with each click helps avoid the wall-of-text problem that VNs sometimes have. (Plus, as has been noted on the main page, it helps draw the reader in.)