i'm slightly embarrassed to admit that this might be too vanilla for me to relate to. going to a crowded bar is one of the most uncomfortable things i can imagine (though i appreciate that wallflowering was an option), i don't entirely know what a yandere is, and i was left wondering why he didn't turn into a hot demon before we had sex,
clearly well-written though, and putting in the effort for different body types is a really considerate touch