I absolutely adore your soundtrack choices! And I know you said that's the only part not created by you, but still, picking the right music to set the tone for your story is still a pretty hard thing to do. I think what you chose really added to the overall atmosphere of the game and I looove the one you picked for the title screen :3 Everything just fits the world you've created very well.

Secondly, having read through your note at the end, you have nothing to apologise for! It's easy to see how much work went into this project :3 And for a solo dev, you've made a huge amount of content in the span of a month. I know it's hard to take a step back and congratulate yourself when we're our own worst critics, and I'm guilty of beating myself up all the time for not doing good enough, but you do deserve a pat on the back for getting such a big chunk of your story completed in time for the jam deadline :D

Good luck with the rest of development, and with the webtoon too! I hope you have lots of fun in the process :3