I see an idea there that could be interesting, I liked some of the effects, but is true I was slightly confused as to what to do, some instructions would have helped a lot, and some sort of narrative at the beginning. Although I love ambiguous games I also enjoy when there is a thread I can follow. 

Overall it has potential just work a bit more on those parts and I think the game could grow a lot! 

I like what you're going for but I had no real idea what I needed to do, it was hard to see even with the flashlight