Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
Tags
A jam submission

The Heist of Cardell CastleView game page

Take part in a daring heist, where everything is at stake (Game Jam)
Submitted by Crucible Gaming — 7 hours, 25 minutes before the deadline
Add to collection

Play game

The Heist of Cardell Castle's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Playability & Innovation#24.0004.000
Fun & Appeal#44.0004.000
Overall#44.0004.000

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • Very nice and short little game with a decent amount of replay and story. Was there a crossroads? I don't recall seeing one

Game Name
The Heist of Cardell Castle

Developer Name(s)
Crucible Gaming

Genre (especially if not a turn-based RPG)
RPG, Puzzle

Leave a comment

Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.

Comments

Developer

Hey, there was some confusion on what the crossroads was. It was at the very end. Since the players were teleported onto the road, it was a crossroad as they could go either way, even though it was only a road. 

Submitted

Hello, I played your game! But to be fair... I don't really know what to say about it after playing. But I'm going to make an effort and come up with a review. So what can be said about it?

The Heist of Cardell Castle is a very simple RPG which have the originality to make us play as a group of thieves. We play as Gil the Bard, Stephen the (Thief) Fighter and Ehly the Sorcerer. These classes make me strangely think of Dungeons & Dragons, is there inspiration from there?

Anyway, let's get over the points that poses me problem.

- Why Stephen's class is the "Thief Fighter" as all of them as thieves? It sounds redundant.

- I see some people encountered a softlock with your game. I was lucky enough to not encounter it myself, but make sure this kind of thing does not happen. For example, in the case of the statue, you could have regroup the party before causing the statue to move. Or check if one of the followers won't be on the way of the statue and prevent the player to activate it explaining the path must be cleared.

- You might want to double check your descriptions.


- Also, I didn't understood what being "Careful" meant. When there is a mechanic like that, don't let your players in the dark, explain it right away. It's a way to ensure your game is fair.

- I would have enjoy your boss battles require a bit more strategy to go through.

Other than that, I have nothing much more to say. The mapping isn't stellar, but it's serviceable. I think this is your average RPG game with a bit more polish can make for a better experience.

With that said, I hope my review will help you in the future. Best of luck!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for your feedback!

Submitted

You're welcome!

Submitted

It's a fantasy Ocean's 11! I had a good time with this game. It's not too long or too challenging. While I might have appreciated a little more challenge, hey, it's a game jam game, and at least it wasn't too hard or long! Here are my thoughts from my playthrough:

  • I appreciate the save prompts.
  • The text tells the story without being too exposition-heavy. Good job!
  • Game froze when I accessed the secret passage under the mage. Thank goodness for the save prompts & autosave!



  • Battles are rather easy. It's a game jam game, so not a *big* deal, but it would be nice to have a little more substance.
  • If you plan on continuing the game, consider letting us play out the final choice. I know this is just a game jam game, but it would be cool to see the actual events!
  • Another polishing point: modify the options menu so it only displays relevant options and options that make sense for this game. There are a lot of options to help customize the experience (not a bad thing), but there are some options, such as encounter rate, that aren't necessary, and the sound effects options are pretty random.
Developer

Thank you so much for the feedback.  A lot of good stuff in here!  I agree with pretty much everything you said if I decide to continue the story in a full game, as opposed to its current "short story" format!  Thanks!

I enjoyed playing through your game and the action. There were a few bugs I think one skill was suppose to reduce defence and not attack since the state icon suggested that's the state it was going to reduce, for Stephen. Then for Ehly her water spray skill says it attacks all enemies but it only targets one. I enjoyed your plot structure and how it played out, the mood was fun and funny and that was great. I liked how you put some personality into pub at the beginning with the different NPC's. I like the short puzzle in the cave as well. I think you created a good short quest / adventure game here. I did like the writing as well, and I thought the characters had personality to me. I think it can expand into something  really good too. As feedback you could maybe make it bigger if you think that's something you may want to do. Good luck though with what you choose to do next! :  )

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much for the feedback!  I'll make sure to tackle those bugs after the jam (I'm assuming we aren't allowed to fix bugs during judging?).  I really appreciate you taking time to play my game and then leave me feedback.

(1 edit)

I'm sorry for my late reply, I'm here actually just to play some games and try and help a little with some feedback, I'm not part of judging at all nor outside of that, sorry! But I hope the feedback helps and I wish you luck with what you do next! : )

Developer

Thank you so much for playing my game!  Feel free to post any feedback, this is my first gamejam and I'm here to compete, but also to learn!