It has great potential, just like someone said in the comments, but you need to let it cook a bit more.

The story sounds interesting, but there's no intro or anything, so if someone doesn't ready the description of the game's page, they will have no idea what the heck is going on.

The gameplay in general feels terrible. The movement is weird, most of the environment feels empty (which is strange, since it looks like a abandoned place, you would expect junk and other broken furniture around the place), and since there's no dialogue, the puzzles feel forced and bland, even more when you have to start over when you die.

I wholehearted agree this has some insane potential, but right now the game is REALLY raw for me to give a good rating. I do saw some of your other games seem more polished, so I wish you good luck on this one, if you ever do finish it of course.