I was enjoying the story and was also unsure if that was the ending or if something had gone wrong. Played twice and got same result. Anyway, if this is a work in progress then I would definitely say keep going with it!

This game creates a suspenseful atmosphere, but the ending left me confused. I wasn’t sure if the game was supposed to end abruptly, or if it crashed on my device.

Dude, the tension build up was so good! The end got me so bad. Can't wait to see what you come up  with next.

Avery... do as you're told

What a beautiful game page! I didn't play the game yet, because that will be done during the LIVE STREAM following the jam submission period--this will be hosted on my channel : 

Charley the Postman - YouTube

Tell me, did you enjoy the creation of this project? Also, is it done for the jam? 

What did you enjoy most about the jam, and what did you dislike most about the jam? Got any ideas on how it could be improved? Honestly this is my first jam hosted, and I have no clue what I am doing. Just asking about, changing things here and there--which is why feedback is important.

Anyway, cheers. Will I be seeing you at the live stream?