I like the instrumentation choices here! Lots of cool melodies going on here. I don't want to repeat what others are saying, so I will build upon it. Another thing that could help with space is a good use of panning, I recommend checking a guide to get used to the fundamentals of it. I assume you like Toby fox's work also, I think it could be helpful for learning to try and recreate a few of his tracks in your daw, it doesn't have to be perfect but it is part of how he learned to be a composer too I believe. 

Also, I noticed your channel rack didn't have any of your soundfonts linked to the mixer. You can scroll up on the "..." on your channel racks to assign it to a mixer track, and on the mixer it would be a lot easier to control your instruments. I hope you plan on joining more jams in the future! It was nice listening to this!

You definitely had some great moments in here. It did sound muddy with so much going on. Spacing it out, Simplifing it and adjusting some Volume levels would help with actually following what's going on. I think with an extra beat or space in between Your piece would hit harder and be more readable.

8 bit goodness. I like the chords. Nice work!

Amazing raw saw sound with 8 bit. I feel like however that to many instruments are moving at the same time. Allow each part to breath on it's own. Then feel free to introduce them all at once for a chaotic effect. Other wise this was a great track. Nice use of soundfonts as well.

I really enjoyed the sounds that you chose for this piece. The only critique I really have for this is that it feels really chaotic at the beginning. Personally, I would just pick one instrument to start the track and allow it to build up. This way, when you reach the "chorus" it is more grand and feels earned in a way. Aside from arrangement, I thought this was a nice track. Well done :)

Looking at the piano rolls on these entries is so cool since it always looks like artwork.

Some of the chords you used were really nice.

Something I would suggest to improve is allowing parts to breathe a little more. As it is now it feels like it is constantly going with new notes all the time but letting some notes sit for a while or even taking away more instruments and leaving parts isolated can make a track feel more full counterintuitively since the full parts will feel even more fleshed out.

This is actually really great! I love the usage of pure Saw waves as aggressive leads in 8bit style music like this, and you really got the Palindrome composition right.

Good work!