Play book
Natural Selection's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #6 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Concepts & Originality | #15 | 3.935 | 3.935 |
| Overall | #18 | 3.710 | 3.710 |
| Adherence to Theme | #40 | 3.194 | 3.194 |
Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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great storytelling 5/7 :)
Elves are definitely on the suffering track this jam! Nicely written, was the Stinger Armour analog to the Striking Scorpion or Eldar Ranger?
My understanding is that Stingers are basically OPR Striking Scorpions.
Enjoyed the ending, and the lead up to it was very well done. You're lead to believe one thing is true and at the end you learn the truth even though it doesn't matter.
Classic case of ambushing the ambusher, but executed well. Well-paced and great with explaining the info a reader might not know.
I really like the imagery of the dwarf sitting on his porch smoking a pipe. You did a really good job with your imagery.
great story! Loved it!
Good stuff.