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A jam submission

Deja Lou's Pizza & CatfishView game page

Made for Narrative Driven Jam #6
Submitted by Patrick Knisely (Pdyx) — 22 hours, 41 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#83.7954.000
Theme#153.4793.667
Enjoyment#203.2683.444
Concept#332.9513.111
Overall#332.6532.796
Audio#360.9491.000
Graphics#391.4761.556

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Did you use any optional theme? If so which one?

Pizza lover

Memories

Lying on a bed of stars

What game engine did you use?
Twine

Discord username (optional)
Pdyx#9917

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Oh wow, that was an incredibly little story. Really well written!!

Submitted(+1)

Very well written and interesting from start to finish, would've been lovely to have some music/sounds and/or visuals to acompany the great storytelling! Congratulations :)

Submitted(+1)

An interesting, well-written story! Nice work!

Submitted(+1)

Pros

Really well written plot! Very engaging story! You have some really good writing skills.

Great characters and amazing descriptions.

You managed to implement the main theme and the subthemes really well!

Cons

Perhaps some music would have been a great addition to the game.

Overall: great work! A really nice text based game! I was left wondering though...why does nobody order the catfish? 

Submitted(+1)

Although it's a text based game, it's definitely enjoyable as the story is very well written and the characters are really interesting. Nice game!