Interesting. I liked your use of different voices but I did get a little disoriented as to whether each color represented a singular voice. I didn't follow exactly what the main character was struggling with that they were arguing with themselves about. But overall I enjoyed the concept and I thought the writing was very poetic in places. Nice job!

A very cool concept and I loved it! The different voices were quite interesting. Somehow grounding the player a bit more would have been cool though, perhaps fleshing out the lucid moments a bit more would give them something more to work on, and make the dives into the "brainstorms" a bit more out there and abstract!

The endings were cool and I like the idea.

I think it might be an interesting concept, but I didn't understand much of what happened. Maybe with a little bit more context, it might be easier for the player to enjoy it!

I like how the different voices were interesting and distinct, especially for something so short. However, I'm not sure I  understand what happened, if anything. I think it's about multiple narrators, and the "main" one has just become one of them?  An interesting concept on its own, but the execution could've been better. The different colours help a bit in distinguishing between them, but overall it feels a little chaotic. Also it ends very abruptly. I guess it's as the description said, though - "There is no story."

I hope this feedback helps.