This is so random haha! I absolutely loved it though. Made me giggle a few times. You pretty much nailed the spontaneous internet humor. Also agree with everyone, the transition into the computer (and the detail of that part) was awesome, and I love how the whole game loops.
The only note I have is that the dialog format is inconsistent. You have the simple dash for the random people, and you have the speaker label (Me: "") for the box. It would look a little nicer to pick one to go with. Personally I suggest the second one so you can pick funny names for the characters like... "Sir man" "Sombrero man" and "LOUD MAN" xD xD xD
Aside from that, great job!
-Sasha
Play game
Locked Up - A Narrative Box Experience's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Enjoyment | #15 | 3.402 | 4.167 |
Audio | #17 | 2.858 | 3.500 |
Theme | #20 | 3.402 | 4.167 |
Overall | #21 | 2.948 | 3.611 |
Concept | #22 | 3.130 | 3.833 |
Story | #25 | 2.449 | 3.000 |
Graphics | #26 | 2.449 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 6 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.