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Penrose: Dawning's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| How do you rate the game overall? | #11 | 3.300 | 4.667 |
| How interesting is the use of themes and diversifiers? | #11 | 3.064 | 4.333 |
Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Super pretty art and css, I really enjoyed the writing so I'm excited for the full version now!!!!
I really liked this game, it was very melancholic. I loved this sad feeling of returning home to a place that has just sort of rusted and withered away, and the artwork and music did a lot to make it contemplative and moving. I hope you continue to make more games in this world, it is very clear that you have some more stories to tell in this setting and with these characters!
thank you, it means a lot to hear! never put my characters/stories out like this before so its hard to know how people will take it sometimes, and what you say is what id hope people take from it.
I like the concept and general mood/atmosphere of the story, and would love to read more one day. The art is lovely. I like the use of the theme. Unfortunately there were quite a few typos. which took me out of the reading experience, a little bit.
yea i had a feeling there would be typos. bad dyslexia here. read it so many times but i guess i still missed some lol. i will hopefully try and fix some and update for that. if you or anyone else wants to point out any specifics it would certainly be welcomed
I can replay it in the next few days and collect all I noticed :]
no rush! ill check myself today too.
decided to just push out a quick update with what i can find, considering the Jam rating and all happening rn. but if you do want to replay youre always free to let me know what you see :P may likely still be some grammar issues still